高考英语作文抢分攻略：考前必知五大高分特点！(4)
四、使用主题句和过渡句
使用主题句和过渡语使文章层次清楚，衔接自然，一方面显示作者娴熟的写作技巧，另一方面可大大提升文章的档次，博得阅卷老师的青睐，为获取理想的分数打下良好的基础。
【典例4】在生活中，我们会遇到各种挑战，但是每个人应对挑战的方法有所不同。请以"The challenge I met"为题，为校报的"英语园地"写一篇英文稿件。内容包括： 1. 你面临的挑战是什么； 2. 你是如何积极应对的。Horses and pigs are great to be around.马年和猪年出生的人非常平易近人。 注意：词数100左右。
【思路分析】根据写作要求，考生应围绕"The challenge I met"这个话题展开写作。内容包括两个方面：一、自己面临的挑战是什么；二、自己是如何迎接这个挑战的。根据试题说明，应用第一人称来写，以一般过去时为主，可穿插使用一般现在时。
【高分范文】
The challenge I metAll of us are faced with challenges in life and we have different ways to meet them. Now Id like to share how I made efforts to improve my physics. After entering senior high school, I had great difficulty learning physics. So I was determined to do something to improve it. Firstly, I prepared my lessons carefully before class and marked where I didnt understand. Secondly, I listened attentively in class, eager to find out what I didnt know. If there were still some problems troubling me, I would turn to my teacher for help. Now I have made great progress in physics. I believe as long as you try your best, you will surely meet any challenge bravely.
【名师点拨】
第一段是全文的中心，提纲挈领地概述了全文的内容，巧妙地导入话题。第一段的第二句为过渡句，暗示第二段陈述自己应对某种挑战的经历。 第二段通过So, Firstly, Secondly, 很好地把句子连接起来，完整地陈述了自己克服困难，提高物理成绩的经过。 最后一段对自己提高物理成绩的经历进行一个总结。最后一句既突出了中心，又很好地升华了主题。
使用主题句和过渡语使文章层次清楚，衔接自然，一方面显示作者娴熟的写作技巧，另一方面可大大提升文章的档次，博得阅卷老师的青睐，为获取理想的分数打下良好的基础。
【典例4】在生活中，我们会遇到各种挑战，但是每个人应对挑战的方法有所不同。请以"The challenge I met"为题，为校报的"英语园地"写一篇英文稿件。内容包括： 1. 你面临的挑战是什么； 2. 你是如何积极应对的。Horses and pigs are great to be around.马年和猪年出生的人非常平易近人。 注意：词数100左右。
【思路分析】根据写作要求，考生应围绕"The challenge I met"这个话题展开写作。内容包括两个方面：一、自己面临的挑战是什么；二、自己是如何迎接这个挑战的。根据试题说明，应用第一人称来写，以一般过去时为主，可穿插使用一般现在时。
【高分范文】
The challenge I metAll of us are faced with challenges in life and we have different ways to meet them. Now Id like to share how I made efforts to improve my physics. After entering senior high school, I had great difficulty learning physics. So I was determined to do something to improve it. Firstly, I prepared my lessons carefully before class and marked where I didnt understand. Secondly, I listened attentively in class, eager to find out what I didnt know. If there were still some problems troubling me, I would turn to my teacher for help. Now I have made great progress in physics. I believe as long as you try your best, you will surely meet any challenge bravely.
【名师点拨】
第一段是全文的中心，提纲挈领地概述了全文的内容，巧妙地导入话题。第一段的第二句为过渡句，暗示第二段陈述自己应对某种挑战的经历。 第二段通过So, Firstly, Secondly, 很好地把句子连接起来，完整地陈述了自己克服困难，提高物理成绩的经过。 最后一段对自己提高物理成绩的经历进行一个总结。最后一句既突出了中心，又很好地升华了主题。
